Thursday 6 August 2020

Wild Lab Recount!


We were learning about writing a recount about either The Awapuni Fun Run or Wild Lab and then when we finished we learnt about re-crafting and editing.

I found it easy to publish my writing into a google slide, find backgrounds and change the font and size.

I found it challenging to write my story but make it short since I tend to write a lot.

Next time I will try to make my writing shorter and not to get distracted.

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  2. Hi,Jasmine!
    You have done a good job on this slide/recount.
    I like how its about the wild lab were the WHOLE team toroa got to visit!
    Mabey next time Make your sentences abit more Powerful.

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