Wednesday 4 September 2019

my playground writing


We were learning about how to use polyline and zooming in when we use it so it doesn't look too bad
I found it easy to draw my cats with polyline a design my awesome playground.
I found it hard to finish my writing when we only had a few more minutes. 
I really enjoyed designing my playground and it ended up not looking to bad!  
Next time I need to probably be quicker when I write because I was a bit slow and ended up not doing much...

4 comments:

  1. kia ora jasmine, i really like your cat park.next time can you talk more about it like what everything is.

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  2. i also like your writing about warrior cats can you talk more about them?

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  3. Hi Jasmine, I like the way you put some writing in of the warrior cats story, next time check your spelling tip: staring not starring anyway good job!

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  4. like about your work is you have a great pictures in your slide show and what i like about your work is Halloween and next time can you put more detail and and can you put more slides in it by azailia

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