Postcard!

 

What did you learn? I learnt about scams and not to trust emails that say they want my password. I also learned that if you have a padlock on your url that means your website is secure and safe.

What did you enjoy? I enjoyed editing myself in the water and choosing a background and using format options.

What was challenging? Writing in the postcard box because I could not think of what to say.

What was easy? Editing myself into the ocean because i'm use to editing things in google drive.

What will you do next time? Next time I will write more in my postcard because it was short.

Moari Colours Animation!

Hold down your right arrow key to watch the animation!

We were learning about maori colours, how to say them and then make a digital animation on scratch, slides or we could make a google drawing.

I found it easy to write the maori since it's not that hard I think other people found that hard though.

I found it challenging to animate each slide because my internet was slow and it was glitching but I manged to finish it in the end. :)

Next time I will make my animation shorter because this took over 100 slides to make...

How To Make A Recount... With Krisharn!

Me and my writing buddy (Krisharn) discovered these 10 things that make a good recount.

1.Use interesting words

2. Make sure your recount is in order.

3.Always use time connectives.

4.Make sure your answering who,what,when,why.

5.To make it interesting Include scenes such as see,hear,smell,touch,taste.   

6. Using adjectives, onomatopoeia and putcation.

7. Use 1,2,3 planning for your paragraphs.

8.Make sure paragraphs are not too long.

9.Recounts are in the past not present

10.End with feelings.

My writing goal for term 4 is too write less long paragraphs.

We were learning about recounts again and remembering how to make a recount and gather our facts and put them into a doc and then post our thoughts onto our blogs.

I found it easy to remember all my facts and knowledge about recounts and then put it into a doc it was also helpful watching the recount recap video.

It was hard to think of 10 reasons because we only thought of about 6 reasons at first.

Next time I will get more ideas and rewatch the video.